My Brothers

The agreement

Gabriel and the other angels were gone for a while. It looks like the authority to make this decision only resides with Gabriel and his angels. What seemed like eternity for Bruce. But waiting for eternity is worth it if it means a chance to save my brothers. They have no idea what they are in for. And so many more. ” I truly hope I get the chance” thought Bruce. Bruce could see and hear wailing, crying, screaming and the sounds to torture. On the others side, far away what looked like Abram. There, it looked like total peace. “When I used to hear about Heaven, I never realized what that would be like.”  “Looking I could get the sense, my soul knew what peace felt like just looking” he thought to himself.  Bruce could’t hear a thing over the wailing. It seemed they were doing something with their teeth. -gnashing. The longer he was there, the more concerned he became about avoiding and if not him, at least his brothers the dark side.

As Bruce pondered more about what he saw, he noticed a few of the angels looking his way. Did that mean, they were about to make a decision? The group parted Gabriel led the group his way.

 

What happens next. What is the decision.

Emotions

Emotions – the potential end of mankind

Mankind has in the 21st century always thought there were other forms of life. This type of alien was never what he expected. 

 

The next story to add to my anthology. The first sci-fi genre.

All of the trips to the moon and thoughts about Mars and yet there maybe other forms of life out there. Is it normal for  the words “unprecedented” or “never recorded” used in a sentence frequently?

 

What other incredible stories in the anthology. Each week, I’ll give a taste.

My Brothers

My Brothers

Many years ago a man met a famous angel. This angel told him that it was his time. “Is it really? I have so many things to do”. I wasn’t mean to people but I didn’t finish” he said with panic in his eyes. “It is time. You had plenty of time” said the angel with determination. While they were talking, darkness began to envelop all around him. A dim light could be seen way off in the distance. With this light, shadows of a chasm began to take shape. The man was aghast. Fear like water rising over your head began. “Where am I going? he asked? “Over to the other side of the chasm replied the angel. Wait, what did I do wrong?

 

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Can I save my brothers?

“If I can save my brothers, there will be so many that will believe in you.” begs Bruce. “Why should we break the rules for you? We have never ever considered this for anyone. There are the prophets and numerous believers they can listen to. If they won’t hear them, then they deserve destruction.

If we allow you to go back and warn your brothers, then we should allow that for everyone that has had a similar request.” says Gabriel.

“The difference is my brothers have influence over so many people. The ability to spread your word is so easy. Let me help with making sure there are many more people following you.” replies Bruce.
“I know they would do anything to avoid what I’m seeing now.” pleads Bruce.

Remembering the fires all around; the darkness; the screams of those in pain increase his motivation.

Gabriel and the other angels move physically away briefly

 

What is gonna happen next?

 

Will Gabriel and the angels consider Bruce’s suggestion?

Will the angels and Gabriel forget about it and send him to destruction?

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Relaunch November

Relaunch progress

Relaunching or rewriting a series definitely can be challenging. Several challenges arise. Time management of course is one of the biggest. Taking each day at a time, one sentence at a time helps.

Something I recently learned was while listening to an audiobook, Lord of the Rings, I realized there were descriptions that I should add. For instance there are scenes I could add what the weather is like or where the sun is. Or even the time of day. Such detail as whether or not there is a breeze or scorching heat or blistering cold.

As I listened I recalled sections of the story I needed to add to.

For a long time I thought because I barely had enough time to write, reading or listening to audiobooks reading other books was not a smart use of time. Now I realize differently.

The important part is to balance.

 

Check back to find out my progress.